Wednesday, April 16, 2008

USHERING DAWN

Annihilating darkness, the dawn unveils its visage,
The naked skies adorn their azure robes.
The crimson sun obscures morbid reflections of the deceased night,
The chirping birds abrogate the vicissitudes of the vacillating storm.

The cacophonous alarm engulfs the reticent air,
The promiscous nocturnal parleys succumb to the chivalrous morn.
Nimbleness is the victor over vanquished lethargy -
As, the redolent breeze is resplendent with agility.

My lips whisper an incoherent rhyme,
My countenance reveals ivincible serendipity.
That silhouette with the halo illuminates my window,
The deluge of His concomitance erects around me a citadel.

My past may be brindled as the night, but my reminiscences are pristine,
For, this new day epitomizes my clandestine celestial camaraderie.

3 comments:

Vishal Kumar said...

Too Good... Last Stanza Was superb.
Will advise you to use other word rather than using Annihilating at the start.

Poem reflected the very common essence with beauty.

Vaishalee said...

Thanx Vishal....for the words of praise :)
As for ur suggestion, it is valuable too. But i guess, darkness is very intimidating...and the first step to any new dawn, read happiness, is to 'annihilate' the darkness, read pain.

Vishal Kumar said...

actually i have been dark writer...and love darkness..so have kind of inclination towards darkness..thats why don't prefer to use such words with it :D